by Darcy » Thu May 05, 2022 2:27 pm
Thanks Guys! Really appreciate the guidance.
I write fiction, as to be completely honest, I usually don't dig those "there I was" books, and there are so many out there that have done cooler shit, but some street cred could sell some novels and get some followers.
Novel 2 has been done a long while, but publishing has been held up with a very slow editor, among other things. Here's my very lame first draft trying to promote the thing, work in progress:
A collection of narratives follows two different pilots around the globe; Jacques, a womanizing rascal, and Jed, a young lad finding his way. While trouble finds Jacques easily enough, Jed slowly seeps into the criminal underworld in his quest for money. Saddled with love for a mobster's wife, Jed plunders ever deeper into events that threaten his moral fibre, while Jacques galavants around the globe loving life. Follow the two men from the forests of Manitoba to the deserts of Somalia, from the Black Sea Coast to the beaches of Gabon, from Azerbaijan to the depths of Tangiers, from the jungles of Suriname, Trinidad & Tobago and Colombia, back to Canada’s East Coast. Their lives become intertwined, their fate inescapable.
Publishers want more of a story breakdown on a submission (not for the book cover) but it goes something like this:
Part One alternates between the stories of two men. In Part Two their stories become intertwined.
Jed, our main protagonist, is a young man beginning his career. Questionable opportunities present themselves, and the major thread of the novel is Jed’s slow drift into decadence.
As a young pilot in northern Canada he beds a married First Nations woman whose husband has ties to organized crime. The husband’s brother extorts money from the young man so he abandons Canada for a life of contracts around the world. He is tempted by illegal activity in each international destination. The brother pursues mob ties to locate him, so this keeps him on the move. With each chapter Jed delves deeper into illegal activity: embezzlement, smuggling, aiding migrants into Europe, the illicit sex-trade, counterfeit aircraft parts…
Throughout Jed’s journey I’ve interspersed snipits of Jacques. He is a womanizing rascal with a tendency towards philosophy while drunk.
The stories follow the two men from northern Manitoba to the deserts of Somalia, from the Turkish and Romanian Black Sea Coast to the beaches of Gabon, from Baku to Tangiers, Trinidad & Tobago to Suriname, Kenya, etc., All places I am intimate with.
In Part Two Jed and Jacques meet and become friends but in the end Jed’s illegal activities cause Jacque’s death. This throws Jed into a final meeting with the wife’s husband.